Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Higher

education

is a promising opportunity for a job applicant to be more competitive among other employees in respectable careers.

However

, some might argue that getting

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experience provides more skills that can be essential in future

career

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,

while

others fully support the former statement. it seems to me that

although

many positions allow getting job experience without any degree, it is

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higher

education

which accesses

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good

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ahead. On the one hand, career background is essential for some careers.

Firstly

, staff with richer background know more insight information about certain aspects of work,

therefore

, more effective and contributing to the employer company. More importantly, workers as

such

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earning money and financially support their families early on.

However

, paying tuition fees at the university might be unaffordable for most

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families,

hence

higher

education

is not a choice for them.

Also

, employers look for any working background, knowing that

such

applicants are familiar with corporate etiquette and know how to collaborate with colleagues.

On the other hand

, a degree is what substantiates the proficiency and

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knowledge of the future specialists.

For example

, it is safe to say that doctors with

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university

education

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much more reliable than the ones who started their practice night after graduating high school, so the hospital would give the position to someone with a diploma.

Besides

, the

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jobs with high wages

also

require world-class, acknowledged competency.

Furthermore

,

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degree from

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internationally praised institution can be a paramount point in one’s CV, and be an

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feature for

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employers. In conclusion, even though both views have their own implications, I believe that higher

education

is essential in getting a good workplace and the key to

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success in the desired spheres.