the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the Unite Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the Unite Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates living in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal people who average carbon dioxide
emissions
per person between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, beginning in 1967, the highest average carbon dioxide
emissions
were in the
UK
and the lowest
emissions
were in Portugal.
However
, after four years until 2007, the
emissions
in these two
countries
became noticeably close.
On the other hand
, the
emissions
in
Sweden
were more than in Italy in 1967, but start to reverse in 1987 until the end of the graph. In 1967, the
emissions
in the
UK
were far greater than in other
countries
around 11 metric
tonnes
, but they were a gradual decrease in the
emissions
.
On the other hand
, Portugal was the lowest
emissions
compared to other
countries
around 1 metric tonne, but they stable increased and the opposite of the
UK
from 1967 to 2007.
At the end
of the information from the graph, the
emissions
in the
UK
were around 9 metric
tonnes
compared to Portugal's around 5 metric
tonnes
the
emissions
were a significant reduction
In addition
, Italy and
Sweden
also
had different patterns in
emissions
. In 1967, The
emissions
per person in
Sweden
were around 9 metric
tonnes
. After that, the
emissions
decreased significantly had declined to 5 metric
tonnes
in 2007 becoming the lowest average
emissions
in one of the
countries
.
Conversely
, the
emissions
in Italy was continuously rising between 1967 and 2007 had risen to around 8 metric
tonnes
.
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