the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the Unite Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates living in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal people who average carbon dioxide emissions
per person between 1967 and 2007. Overall
, beginning in 1967, the highest average carbon dioxide emissions
were in the UK
and the lowest emissions
were in Portugal. However
, after four years until 2007, the emissions
in these two countries
became noticeably close. On the other hand
, the emissions
in Sweden
were more than in Italy in 1967, but start to reverse in 1987 until the end of the graph.
In 1967, the emissions
in the UK
were far greater than in other countries
around 11 metric tonnes
, but they were a gradual decrease in the emissions
. On the other hand
, Portugal was the lowest emissions
compared to other countries
around 1 metric tonne, but they stable increased and the opposite of the UK
from 1967 to 2007. At the end
of the information from the graph, the emissions
in the UK
were around 9 metric tonnes
compared to Portugal's around 5 metric tonnes
the emissions
were a significant reduction
In addition
, Italy and Sweden
also
had different patterns in emissions
. In 1967, The emissions
per person in Sweden
were around 9 metric tonnes
. After that, the emissions
decreased significantly had declined to 5 metric tonnes
in 2007 becoming the lowest average emissions
in one of the countries
. Conversely
, the emissions
in Italy was continuously rising between 1967 and 2007 had risen to around 8 metric tonnes
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