the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the Unite Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates living in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal people who average carbon dioxide Use synonyms
emissions
per person between 1967 and 2007. Use synonyms
Overall
, beginning in 1967, the highest average carbon dioxide Linking Words
emissions
were in the Use synonyms
UK
and the lowest Use synonyms
emissions
were in Portugal. Use synonyms
However
, after four years until 2007, the Linking Words
emissions
in these two Use synonyms
countries
became noticeably close. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
emissions
in Use synonyms
Sweden
were more than in Italy in 1967, but start to reverse in 1987 until the end of the graph.
In 1967, the Use synonyms
emissions
in the Use synonyms
UK
were far greater than in other Use synonyms
countries
around 11 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
, but they were a gradual decrease in the Use synonyms
emissions
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Portugal was the lowest Linking Words
emissions
compared to other Use synonyms
countries
around 1 metric tonne, but they stable increased and the opposite of the Use synonyms
UK
from 1967 to 2007. Use synonyms
At the end
of the information from the graph, the Linking Words
emissions
in the Use synonyms
UK
were around 9 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
compared to Portugal's around 5 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
the Use synonyms
emissions
were a significant reduction
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In addition
, Italy and Linking Words
Sweden
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also
had different patterns in Linking Words
emissions
. In 1967, The Use synonyms
emissions
per person in Use synonyms
Sweden
were around 9 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
. After that, the Use synonyms
emissions
decreased significantly had declined to 5 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
in 2007 becoming the lowest average Use synonyms
emissions
in one of the Use synonyms
countries
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the Linking Words
emissions
in Italy was continuously rising between 1967 and 2007 had risen to around 8 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
.Use synonyms
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