The given maps represent the island before and after the construction of several buildings for tourists.
The given maps represent the
island
before and after the construction of several buildings for tourists.
Overall
, the aforementioned before
Correct word choice
apply
island
experienced dramatical
changes Replace the word
dramatic
such
as buildings of plenty of residential houses and the
Correct article usage
apply
reception
which highlights the fact that this
island
was fully oriented for the tourists.
Upon initial observation, it becomes evident, that for the comfort of visitors
the Add a comma
,visitors
island
was covered with footpath
and vehicle track. The vehicle track is located around the Correct article usage
a footpath
reception
whereas
the footpath leads to every accommodation. Moreover
, as it
can be noticed from the maps, behind the Correct pronoun usage
apply
reception
and nearby the sea the restaurant was engineered.
It is interesting to notice, that despite the absence of any changes, the beach was renamed as
swimming beach. Correct your spelling
a
Furthermore
, next to the reception
, a pier was built as a station for boats.Submitted by dnm.best on
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