The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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The bar chart illustrates the data on the
number
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of car journeys into the city centre in two different aspects which are from
residents
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and non-
residents
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from the
year
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1996 until 2005.
Overall
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, the
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of car journeys made by
residents
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outnumbered the non-
residents
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in the 1990s era and it decrease as it enter the
year
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of 2000s because the introduction of parking meters.
On the other hand
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, non-
residents
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have a stable increase in the years 1990s and a slight fall when entering the
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2000 continued by a dramatic fall in 2003 as Westgate Street and Park Lane are closed to traffic.
Initially
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, the
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used their cars a lot before parking meters were introduced. The
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of journeys was approximately reaching 10000 but it fluctuated by 5000 people and barely made changes in the numbers.
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,the fall continue by 1000 in 2003 and it does not have many changes as the maximum
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of
residents
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using their cars is 4000 people.
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, for non-residential, the
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mushroomed about 2 times from 4000 to 8000 in the first
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period. But the numbers have a slight drop in the
year
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2000 by 200 but they made a comeback in the
year
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2002.
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, they had a sharp dive in numbers in 2003 as it decrease to 3000 and made a slight increment in the
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2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, residents, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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