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The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the comparison of the
number
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 of
people
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 per household in the UK between 1981 and 2001.
Overall
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, what stands out from the data is that the average
number
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 of
people
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 occupying a household changes over time.
While
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 2 categories of the household increases the rest saw a decrease in
number
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. In 1981, 2
people
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 living in a house accounts for the largest portion
while
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 a shared house for 5 to 6
people
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 is the smallest. A total of 31 from 2 occupants and 6, respectively.
Moreover
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, the
number
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 remains unchanged even in the next period.
In addition
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, the total
number
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 of
people
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 living alone noticeably increases in the future from 17 to 26
whereas
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, the rest of the figures experience a decrease in
number
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.
For example
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, the 3 and 4
number
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 of occupants drops to about 3 in 2001.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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