The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the yearly profits of three bakeries in Calgary, from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, the earnings of Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery gradually increased over the next ten years, unfortunately, the
profit
of Marishop declined from initial profits in the year 2000. As is presented on the graph, during the period of 2000 all the three companies are competing well,
along with
this
Mari Bakeshop is positioned at the top level. By 2005, rapid loss affected the
profit
of Marishop, and the other two shops' businesses moved in an upward direction and touched the highest
profit
by the end of 2010.
By contrast
, the
profit
of Mari Bakeshop went in the opposite direction. Takings fluctuated around $90,000 until 2004. After That despite falling sharply to just over $40,000 in 2008, the figure
then
levelled off in the
last
two years. Within a time span of ten years, Amandine Bakery continues its successful business track record and crossed its annual
profit
above $100000 leaving the other two shops with under $80000 in earnings.
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