In some of countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Certain countries face with
problem
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the problem
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of surging obesity of
nation
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the nation
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while
physical
activiy
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activity
are
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is
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declining. It is required
for
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to
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establish
reason
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the reason
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for
this
poor trend and develop various solutions to address
this
problem
.
Firstly
, the main cause of
this
huge trouble
do
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not want to spend time in
sport
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gym or
other kind
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another kind
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of sport exercise. It is because individuals do not
understandt
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understand
what
it
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is essential for their health,
therefore
obese, unfortunately, not
reason
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a reason
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to do sport.
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,
people
which
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who
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work in offices do not
want
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towant
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lose and goal to do some exercise just for
thier helth
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their health
indeed. Solution
of
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this
essential topic
to
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is to
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encourage
government
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a government
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healthy view to nation for understanding
importance
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the importance
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of
this
topic. 
Secondly
, certain
people
can not
to
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let themselves
to
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stop or control
of
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their ration of daily calories and usually
viaolate
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violate
their
diet
.
In other words
, some individuals
not
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do not
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realize
importance
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the importance
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of
diet
and other
cind
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kind
people
faced
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are faced
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with huge options of
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the meal
a meal
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meal
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and forget about
diet
. To
takle
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tackle
take
this
problem
, should be
involve
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some
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in some
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kind of app program to
accaunt
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account
daily ration and
sharing
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share
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this
information with their friends
this
will
be motivate
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people
to make some challenges to each other and solve questions about
diet
. In conclusion,
it is clear that
people
are faced with a poor
problem
of obesity ,
,
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however
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,however
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there are various of
solve
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this
problem
, undoubtedly individuals should control their
diet
and daily exercise.
People
should understand
of
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the importance of a healthy view and involve in their lives.
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