The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.
The diagram illustrates a linear process of producing
sugar
out of sugar
cane.
Overall
, it can be seen there are a total of seven stages which can be categorized into preparation, evaporation, and production.
The process begins with the growth of sugar
cane for a period of 12-18 months then
, they are harvested in two ways; by humans or machines. Next,
sugar
canes are crushed to convert into juice followed by purifying it with a filter of Limestone.
After that, purified juice turns into syrup by heating it with an evaporator. Subsequently
, sugar
crystals in the syrup are collected to produce a purer product, and then
at the final stage, dried and cool sugar
is manufactured.Submitted by parianabiloo78 on
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