Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

With the development of society, public
celebrations
are held in most countries. Nowadays, an issue that has fuelled a heated debate is whether some people say that governments should spend
money
on more useful things. I strongly agree that spending
money
on public
celebrations
is necessary. In
this
essay, I will discuss how public
celebrations
can help spread
culture
and show international status in the
world
.
Firstly
, public
celebrations
can help spread the country's
culture
internationally,
such
as
Christmas
, Thanksgiving and Halloween.
For instance
,
Christmas
Day is the biggest Christian festival in Britain, its meaning is to commemorate the birth of Jesus. Nowadays, almost all countries have
Christmas
. Frankly, British
culture
spread to the
world
.
Moreover
,
Christmas
time will increase tourism revenue and merchandise sales.
Hence
, public
celebrations
have the advantage of spreading
culture
.
Secondly
, public
celebrations
show international status in the
world
,
such
as China's Army Day.
This
is because the more luxurious the festival, the stronger the national power.
For example
,
according to
the Chinese government, they spent a total of 1 billion yuan on Army Day performances in 2010, which put China's military power on display to the
world
. Obviously , It is necessary to invest in it.
Thus
, spending
money
on public
celebrations
can show national power to the
world
. In conclusion, spending
money
on public
celebrations
have advantage and disadvantage. I strongly agree that countries should invest
money
in it. With the development of the national economy, the country will spend more
money
on public
celebrations
in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fostering
  • national pride
  • unity
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of belonging
  • boost the local economy
  • hospitality and retail sectors
  • showcase
  • global audience
  • foreign relations
  • multifaceted
  • allocating
  • quality of life
  • social inclusion
  • cohesive and inclusive society
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