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Some people think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is often said that living in the cities gives them a much greater chance to get a job they want, it is the place to live and has more entertainment opportunities for fun.
This
writer
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 opinion about living in the
city
 is better than living in the countryside. On the one hand, there is a large number of big shops located in the
city
 which give essay
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access
 to everybody to support their daily and extra thing.
For example
, stores like supermarkets, banks, and clothes stores are available everywhere, so we don’t have to go to the
city
 centre.
On the other hand
, traffic could be one of the major disadvantages of living in a big
city
. Many people go to work or go to school by car
due to
 traffic jams. Air in the
city
 is populated worse than air in the countryside.
In addition
, in a big town, there is
consequently
 a lot of pollution and
this
 can really affect people’s healthy. In conclusion, it is a fact that living in the
city
 has a
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 advantages, but it is important to remember to compare before deciding where you could feel better to live.
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