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My name is Damie Virdi. I aspire to be the inspiration of many girls who want to free themselves from the orthodox society and gain self-confidence upon themselves. I was born and brought up in the developing city of Punjab, Jalandhar. I was a pretty decent child who excelled pretty well in both curricular and co-curricular activities. I did my BTech in computer science with a fair score and excelled in my skills in the field of theatre. Following that I pursued MTech which landed me a very respectable job at Dell as Software Developer. Talking about my family, I have my mother who has sacrificed her whole life so that I can achieve all my goals. My father is a small businessman who has worked hard all his life to provide everything
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his family. My brother has just become a lawyer and is excelling well in that. I feel I have achieved my major goals which consist of gaining skills, a good job, a handsome source of income and decent savings. My current goals now revolve around supporting the love of my life, who is wonderfully talented. I believe it becomes my responsibility to support him from all aspects and hopefully imagine him achieving all the success he deserves.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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