Some people think cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and gives your opinion.

Many argue that being

in

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a

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downtown is

the

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good

places

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to live. Meanwhiles, some people choose to have a life in

the

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rural area. It

seem

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to me that

large

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city

is

more

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liveable place than other.

To begin

with, the main of

iving

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living

giving

in the

cities

is there are better job opportunities, most international companies have

office

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offices

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in the big

city

.

Moreover

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job

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in the

cities

are more diverse.

For instance

, in the countryside,it often requires

of

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labour work the income is very low.

Moreover

, the

education

in the rural

areas

.

Hence

, people who live in the

city

can give their offspring better

education

. A recent

stufy

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study

that was conducted in the UK showed that almost 65% of

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school

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in rural

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rural

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areas

lack

compenent

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competent

component

teachers and

leaving

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materials.

This

ineeded

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needed

is evidence that

education

is better in the big

cities

. And

last

but not least, public

transpotation

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transportation

are

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more developed in the urban

areas

there are buses, subway, light way, railway …

Howerver

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However

, there are some drawbacks that come with living in the

cities

. First and foremost, urban

areas

are facing a range of serious environmental issues

such

as air pollution, light pollution, water,

soil

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contamination.

Moreover

, the high cost of living in the

city

. Major

cities

always have a higher cost of living in the

cities

compared to surrounding rural

areas

. Living

expense

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expenses

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such

as rant daily groceries

tent

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to be higher in the large

city

.

Furthermore

, usually moving from the countryside to the

city

include downsizing. Most of

apartments

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in the

in the

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big

cities

are much smaller and

also

it is very difficult to find an outside space like a yard or a patio. In conclusion, living in the

cities

have its own merits and demerits but in my

opinion

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having access to better

education

and better job

opportuinities

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opportunities

outweigh the cons of living in the

cities

.