Some people think cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and gives your opinion.

Many argue that being

in

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a

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downtown is

the

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a

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good

places

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to live. Meanwhiles, some people choose to have a life in

the

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a

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rural area. It

seem

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to me that

large

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city

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is

more

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liveable place than other.

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with, the main of

iving

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living

giving

in the

cities

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is there are better job opportunities, most international companies have

office

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offices

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in the big

city

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.

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Moreover

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job

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jobs

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in the

cities

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are more diverse.

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, in the countryside,it often requires

of

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labour work the income is very low.

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, the

education

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in the rural

areas

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.

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, people who live in the

city

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can give their offspring better

education

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. A recent

stufy

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study

that was conducted in the UK showed that almost 65% of

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schools

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school

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schools

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in rural

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rural

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in rural

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areas

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lack

compenent

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competent

component

teachers and

leaving

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living

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materials.

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ineeded

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needed

is evidence that

education

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is better in the big

cities

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. And

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but not least, public

transpotation

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transportation

are

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more developed in the urban

areas

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there are buses, subway, light way, railway …

Howerver

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However

, there are some drawbacks that come with living in the

cities

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. First and foremost, urban

areas

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are facing a range of serious environmental issues

such

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as air pollution, light pollution, water,

soil

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and soil

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contamination.

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, the high cost of living in the

city

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. Major

cities

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always have a higher cost of living in the

cities

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compared to surrounding rural

areas

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. Living

expense

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expenses

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such

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as rant daily groceries

tent

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to be higher in the large

city

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.

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, usually moving from the countryside to the

city

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include downsizing. Most of

apartments

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the apartments

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in the

in the

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big

cities

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are much smaller and

also

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it is very difficult to find an outside space like a yard or a patio. In conclusion, living in the

cities

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have its own merits and demerits but in my

opinion

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having access to better

education

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and better job

opportuinities

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opportunities

outweigh the cons of living in the

cities

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.