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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

#people #cities #place #countryside
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Many Individuals have a view of the best
place
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 to live in a city but some people have another think that the
countryside
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 is better than living in
cities
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. I totally agree with the first statement. I will throughout
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 essay. In my opinion,
cities
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 are the best
place
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 to live. On the one hand, the city is a known development
place
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, so there are a
lot
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 of modern facilities for hospitals, schools, technology and work. If you live in
cities
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, you will have a
lot
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 of benefits in life.
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, it is a nice
place
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 for making money. You will have a
lot
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 of chances to meet famous people who make a
lot
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 of money in one hour. You can make a
lot
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 of money because in there, it’s easy to find a good job. In ,contrast you can get into debt because in there everything is expensive.
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, the
countryside
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 is
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 to
cities
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. It isn’t modern like
cities
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 but it is very comfortable to live and it has a fresh atmosphere. It isn’t more cost like
cities
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.
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, everything is very cheap and more affordable. The most important when you live in the
countryside
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 is easy to control your emotions or moods. And you can find your hobbies which can’t find in
cities
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. In conclusion, I support the idea of living in
cities
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. In my opinion, it is the best choice because it has more benefits than the
countryside
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. And I want to have modern facilities in school to easy to learn and in the hospital too.
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