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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

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Many Individuals have a view of the best
place
 to live in a city but some people have another think that the
countryside
 is better than living in
cities
. I totally agree with the first statement. I will throughout
this
 essay. In my opinion,
cities
 are the best
place
 to live. On the one hand, the city is a known development
place
, so there are a
lot
 of modern facilities for hospitals, schools, technology and work. If you live in
cities
, you will have a
lot
 of benefits in life.
Moreover
, it is a nice
place
 for making money. You will have a
lot
 of chances to meet famous people who make a
lot
 of money in one hour. You can make a
lot
 of money because in there, it’s easy to find a good job. In ,contrast you can get into debt because in there everything is expensive.
On the other hand
, the
countryside
 is
in contrast
 to
cities
. It isn’t modern like
cities
 but it is very comfortable to live and it has a fresh atmosphere. It isn’t more cost like
cities
.
Moreover
, everything is very cheap and more affordable. The most important when you live in the
countryside
 is easy to control your emotions or moods. And you can find your hobbies which can’t find in
cities
. In conclusion, I support the idea of living in
cities
. In my opinion, it is the best choice because it has more benefits than the
countryside
. And I want to have modern facilities in school to easy to learn and in the hospital too.

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