Some people think cities are the best place to live.Other prefer to live in the countryside.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,most of
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people
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live in big
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.Some of the few live in the
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,they have their own point of view and they decide
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where they live in the future.
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and will give my own
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about
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statement. On the one hand,the
area
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that
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decide to live
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their
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about it.The big
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,
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will be the best
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for
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to live.There
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also
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many opportunities to get a job easily and education is the best
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to study and collect knowledge for students in the future.
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,they have many
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equipment to help their life more comfortable and easy.But the environment here is polluted because many factories and companies exhaust
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making the air in
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area
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decrease seriously and many sick
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that
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community do not have medicine to solve it.Big
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are the best
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to live and have a high percentage of getting a chance to find a job but they a dangerous
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area
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with many crimes and thieves
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people
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worried about where they live.
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,the most peaceful
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people
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can find to live
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is
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the
countryside
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,
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area
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is opposite with
big
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center
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.In the
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,
people
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do not go to
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by car they go there on
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or ride a bike these ways will help the environment fresher,in
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place
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people
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do not have high technology to use for chatting or calling they send a lecture together and wait for a moment to get a reply from the
people
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that they send.Because
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is the
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so many things in
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place
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are very cheap to buy and
people
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here are much friendlier than
people
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in the
cities
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.But
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place
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is out of the internet so the news about the world will be late to get in there for a few days and the education is not better than in the
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so many
people
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will choose the
cities
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as the
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to study and
work
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. In conclusion,
cities
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or the
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them
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is the best
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to live and
work
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in there,both of them have advantages and disadvantages.But in my own opinion,I think
cities
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are the best
place
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to live and
work
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because
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is the best
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to study and has high opportunities to get a job easily
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is my opinion and
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the opinion of some
people
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who want to have a good future in their life.

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