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nowadays the increasing of garbage (waste) is a real concern. why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

#garbage #waste #concern
As we enter
this
 century, the human population is growing at a faster pace than it was a few years ago.
This
 is the biggest problem that must be solved as soon as possible because it leads to an increase in garbage.
This
 essay will explain why
such
 problems occur and how to solve them. There are several possible reasons why
this
 issue occurs.
First,
the overpopulation of mankind reduces
people
's attention to environmental issues, which is a great disadvantage to all. One of his ways to solve
this
 problem is to make
people
 more aware of their surroundings.
For example
, the government should give everyone some advice that makes
people
 more concerned about waste and put more bins in parks and roadsides.
In addition
,
people
 use too much
plastic
 in their activities. As we all know,
plastic
 has become a major source of waste and is difficult to recycle. So when
people
 try to cut
plastic
 from their daily necessities,
for example
 by replacing the use of
plastic
 bags with shopping bags during their monthly grocery shopping, or most simply by using their own bags, can lead to a better world for Bottles
instead
 of
plastic
 - mineral bottles.
Overall
, as long as
people
 across the country get support and action, the waste problem can be easily solved. Because
people
's small actions can bring about a lot of improvement around them.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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