International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some may argue that hosting an international sporting ceremony can be costly and
it
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will create many problems for the hosting
nation
.I completely disagree with
this
statement as Facilitating an international sporting event
that
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brings numerous benefits to the
country
such
as
development
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the development
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of infrastructure facilities
while
promoting
tourism
within the
nation
. On the one hand , to facilitate an international sporting competition , the host should improve their infrastructure provisions as per the standards of
international
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sporting authority or council.
Although
it is costly , those improved facilities will remain for decades even after the event and the citizens will get the benefits of improved amenities for decades.As an example , being the host of the South Asian Games in 2009 , Sri Lanka redeveloped the road network , stadiums , sports clubs and auditoriums in Colombo city and ,still the
nation
is being benefited by those amenities.
On the other hand
, when an international
sports
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sport
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occation
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occasion
happening in a
country
, the fans of the sports from all over the
world
tend to visit the hosting
country
and that will automatically
boosts
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the
tourism
industry
while
bringing foreign currency to the
nation
.
The
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Fans from all over the
world
may watch the event on TV or the Internet and that will
also
be beneficial to attract potential visitors in the future.
For instance
, When Sri Lanka hosted
T20
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Cricket
World
Cup in 2020, many fans from all over the
world
visited Sri Lanka and
also
reveals
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the beauty of the through documentaries which helped uplift
tourism
. In conclusion, facilitating international sporting events impacts countries positively because;
although
hosting requires more budget, the facilities improved through hosting will remain in the
country
.It
also
attracts visitors
while
uplifting
tourism
through
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revealing the beauty of the
nation
easily and effectively.
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