There have been many technological developments in the past few decades, for example in telecommunications, transport and health. What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?

#developments #decades #telecommunications #transport #health #development #people #lives #changes

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

There have been many technological developments in the

last

Linking Words

10 years in various fields, for me, telephones have been one of the most important because they have changed

people

Use synonyms

's lives by revolutionizing the way we communicate and work. But not all the changes brought about by

technology

Use synonyms

have been positive. First of all, telephones are certainly the invention that has changed our lives the most in recent years. They have allowed us to communicate with

people

Use synonyms

physically very far from us, through messages, calls or video calls. We can interact with

people

Use synonyms

in a space

that is

Linking Words

no longer physical but virtual.

For example

Linking Words

, through applications

such

Linking Words

as Instagram, we can get in touch with thousands of

people

Use synonyms

, even though we don't know them and have never seen them.

In addition

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

, the telephone is

also

Linking Words

given credit for revolutionizing the world of work. Today, it is used by most

people

Use synonyms

especially in the workplace, to make appointments and organize meetings.

In addition

Linking Words

to changing existing ones, it has created new jobs. In fact, we are talking about influencers or

people

Use synonyms

who have made social media their job, which is mainly based on showing their daily lives.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, not all changes brought about by

technology

Use synonyms

have been positive. One of the main downsides is that we depend too much on

technology

Use synonyms

This

Linking Words

thing especially affects those who are already with the

technology

Use synonyms

and do not know how to live in a world where there is none.

For example

Linking Words

, every time we go out we always carry our cell phone with us. In conclusion,

although

Linking Words

I don't believe that all the changes brought about by

technology

Use synonyms

have been positive, the invention of cell phones has certainly changed

people

Use synonyms

's way of living and working forever.

Submitted by cecconisofia2002 on Wed Aug 23 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

294 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city
Hope this letter finds you well!
7
band
Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this a case? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In this modern era, there is a tendency for employers to recruit new hirelings who have educational qualifications instead of background skills as well as personal characteristics. This way of thinking is due to the recruiters' strong faith in the university assessment system that can reflect candidates' accomplishments. Nevertheless, this essay disagrees with this view because the newbies without experience may struggle in dealing with customers, and the necessity of real-life experience in fostering cooperation skills.
7.5
band
Parents often give children everything they ask for and let them do what they like. Is it good for children what are the consequences when they grow up
In the contemporary era, late childbirth is always considered a perennial predicament. Therefore, when any parents bear a child, they will tend to indulge their own offspring excessively. The writer of this essay will indicate some demerits of this child-rearing practice is the deteriorating tendency before concluding it may have a myriad of long-term repercussions.
<4
band
For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extend do you agree?
In this contemporary era, the education is an essential part of our life. Some individuals believe that the computer skill can be a fourth skill to be added to the parts of education: reading , writing and math. In this essay , I will discuss this statement and I will draw my personal conclusions.
5.5
band
Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
It is known that most people are passionate about new and stylish clothes . Clothes are very important in our life . This is the main part of our image , which we need every day . When we see a person for the first time , the first thing we pay attention to is clothing . A person dressed neatly , will make a greater impression on us than someone who is sloppy .

There have been many technological developments in the past few decades, for example in telecommunications, transport and health. What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?

Your opinion

Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this a case? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Parents often give children everything they ask for and let them do what they like. Is it good for children what are the consequences when they grow up

For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extend do you agree?

Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?