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Some people think that schools should teach students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #schools #students #abilities
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Nowadays, the emergence of whether
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 , which suits their
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 or
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 in the usual educational system with others, who have different
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 is singled out as a concern preoccupying educationists. Each view holds its pros and cons,
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, I would prefer providing classes for
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due to
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 their
abilities
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. On the one hand,
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study
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 in the
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, where having peers with the same
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 will help these
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 find some motivation from others.
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 is because if pupils were put in competitive environments, which is the best place for children to see other’s hard work, they would pay all their attention to mastering that aspect. The more focused on the
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 process, the better academic performance. That competitive environment may
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 stimulate the desire to
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 in each student, which leads to a higher quality of output, and allows
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 to specialise in their
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.
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,
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 with different
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 gathered in one
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 will be given the opportunity to expand their knowledge by studying from others. As each student has their own knowledge in some aspects, in the
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 environment, these children may give some speech to introduce their
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.
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every student in that
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 to use that information to broaden their horizon, which may ensure that children may have a little knowledge in each aspect to use in real life. In conclusion,
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it supports
 dividing
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due to
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, which allows them to hone their skills, meanwhile, information about other aspects will be easy to search and learn on the online platforms.
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