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Some people think citites are the best place tolive.Other prefer to live in the countryside.Discuss both of view and give your opinion

#people #citites #place #tolive #countryside
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Nowadays,there are many important criteria for choosing a good place.
According to
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 the demand of people,many citizens think that cities are the best place to live and work.
Nevertheless
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,there are others who prefer to spend their lives in the
countryside
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.
This
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 essay agrees that living in a
city
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 is beneficial for residents and many facilities to respond will show
this
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To begin
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 with,the
city
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 provides chances to find a job which is suitable for us.Nowadays,more and more large companies are opening in cities ,so the owner needs a lot of workers to help the company grow and pay high salaries.
On the other hand
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,the development places that offer facilities in the
countryside
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 are not as good as a
city
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.
For example
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,high-tech medical services and a lot of choices related to education or shopping are not crowded.
Therefore
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,people who live in the
city
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 will have a higher quality of life with many beneficial
On the contrary
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,some people prefer to move to rural areas where still have fresh air and resources
such
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 as land, and water.The cost of living in the
countryside
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 is lower than
city
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.
For
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this
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 reason,many jobs here are not developed leading to unemployment is increased.
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,in the rural area,the residents are quite hospitality and friendly,they are always ready to help their neighbours anytime In conclusion,despite the fact that living in the
countryside
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 is easier than
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city
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the city
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 it is not suitable for teenagers who want to climb the career ladder and
also
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 change quickly like in the
city
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.After analysing both statements,I believe that the
city
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 is the best place to live

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