Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In the letter: Give details of how you and your friends use the centre. Explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community. Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to formally request a reconsideration of the recent
decision
to terminate the entertainment centre within our compound. The presence of
this
facility holds significant value to myself and my peers, as it serves as a primary hub for our recreational activities. Whether engaging in tennis, table tennis, or swimming, the entertainment centre plays an integral role in our leisure pursuits. Beyond its personal significance, the entertainment centre
also
holds communal importance within our compound. Should the
decision
to close
this
facility persist, it is likely to evoke discontent among residents who rely on it for their preferred sports and leisure activities. The potential repercussions of
this
decision
extend beyond individual dissatisfaction, as it may prompt residents to seek alternative living arrangements in areas that offer comparable amenities.
Such
a shift in resident sentiment could lead to a decline in property interest and investment within our community, ultimately impacting its
overall
appeal and viability. I trust that a reconsideration of
this
decision
will be made with due consideration for the broader implications it may have on the community and its residents. Yours faithfully, Kurbonov Arthur
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task achievement
Provide specific examples to better illustrate how you and your friends use the center.
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Include a more explicit reference to the community's diverse demographic to bolster the argument for its importance.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.
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Maintained a suitable and respectful writing tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure helps the reader follow your points effectively.
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