The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005
The diagram illustrates how the seaside resort of Templeton had been changed between 1990 and 2005.
It is clear that
there were a lot of noticeable changes during these years such
as several residential areas and kinds of facilities.
In the northwest of the ,
town trees were knocked down and constructed several buildings. Remove the comma
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Also
, in the middle of the ,
city the park was removed and turned into a residential area. Remove the comma
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In addition
, in the southwest of the town whole houses were demolished and made a huge supermarket and lots of high-rise buildings. In 1990, there were no facilities along the sea but in 2005 the railway was constructed from east to west of the sea.
Moreover
, in the north of the ,
sea the trees and houses were removed and a new factory was built along the railway. In the north of the city, next to the bridge, the trees were replaced with new Remove the comma
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airplanes
. Next to the second bridge in the middle of the Change the spelling
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there was one tree and a house that were flattened without any replacement.Add a comma
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