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Lack of freshwater is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

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It cannot be denied that the scarcity of various sources of clean
water
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 is one of the pressing issues of the contemporary
world
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.
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 very shortcoming of drinkable
water
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 resources has a significant amount of detrimental effects on
people
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's health. By patronising recent discoveries and sustainable inventions governments and
world
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 leaders could improve the scenario. Day by day
water
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 is becoming more valuable.
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 of global warming in recent years sea level has increased a lot.
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, waterbodies near the coastal area become salty. So
people
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 who are living in those areas cannot drink clean
water
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 and face health problems.
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, because of industrial pollution natural sources of hygienic
water
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 are becoming less available and undrinkable. Since the
world
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 population has increased a lot
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people
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's life expectancy we are observing overconsumption of underground mineral storage of
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. Governments of different countries who are facing
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 types of incidents and
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 leaders
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 as the European Union
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 the United Nations can shift their eyes to invest more in modern technologies and sustainable inventions that try to solve
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 urgency.
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, there are some scientists who are currently conducting their research on finding a solution that will use renewable sources and recycle
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 purify the polluted
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. Grants from different corporations could make
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 technology cheaper and accessible to the public who are living below the poverty line. In conclusion, I like to mention that
people
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's lack of awareness and education causes these very types of problems around the
world
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,
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, if governments and related authorities ignore the current situation and do not take any necessary steps, our future generation will face the dystopian reality where
people
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 will fight against each other just for a drop of
water
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fresh produce
  • Sustainability
  • Desertification
  • Agricultural yields
  • Hydroponics
  • Organic farming
  • Food deserts
  • Aquaponics
  • Crop rotation
  • Climate change
  • Malnutrition
  • Food security
  • Subsistence farming
  • Genetically modified organisms (GMOs)
  • Agribusiness
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