You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Janey,
How are you?
It's been a long time since we had a discussion do you remember the
laptop
that I told you last
time when we had a video call?I need to sell my MacBook laptop
might be you're interested.
I bought my MacBook Air laptop
1 week ago in the Apple store. Yesterday, my sister sent a message to me that she needed money urgently for her tuition fee because the final exam is coming and my parents don't have a salary yet and it is not enough to pay her tuition too. So, I remembered last
time that you were looking for a laptop
for your brother that's why I sent you an email.
The laptop
is in good condition it is 13.6 inches with 512 GB and is grey in colour. It consists of a charger and I will give you my cover too as a freebie.
If you are interested feel free to come to my house on Monday at 6pm to check and see it personally. We can catch up too and eat dinner together with
my family.
Best Regards
JonnalynSubmitted by ding
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite