ou are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:- - What activities you have planned - When the first meeting takes place and where

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Dear Sir, I am Simran president of an NGO known as " WE DO NOT ACCEPT MONEY AND THINGS". I am a regular reader of your newspaper and I have witnessed that very essential issues or gatherings are well highlighted in the columns of your newspaper.

Therefore

, I have decided to contact you regarding an important meeting that I have organized. I will be very grateful if you could give me some space in your newspaper for the gathering that I have arranged. People from various nationalities can join us in

this

seminar.

Moreover

this

gathering is to discuss issues like the problems of homeless individuals, and insufficient money to get the major diseases treated from the hospitals . We are taking

this

initiative to learn about the problems of commoners. The venue of

this

event is 1022 Airport Road, Brampton and it is taking place on 25th August 2023. I am looking forward to getting some positive outcomes from

this

event. I am working with my whole heart to organise

this

meeting. I hope you are interested in

this

charity work because your contribution is very essential to us. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Simran

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