Some educationalist think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at schools. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
People
argue that International student
exchange
will bring benefits for the students, while
others say that the negative impacts will outweigh the benefits. Personally, I believe that the advantages are clear rather than the disadvantages because it will develop confidence
and respect
among the students.
To begin
, student
exchange
provides an opportunity for teenagers to meet a new culture together with
new people
. By ,this
I mean that while
they are living in new environments they will build confidence
in order to adapt to it. For example
, an Indonesian student
who never went abroad exchanges with a British student
. It is a fact that both Indonesia and Britain have significant differences in cultures, such
as languages, communication styles and education systems. Although
it is hard to adapt to a new culture, they have no choice so they have to build the confidence
to live there. Moreover
, the experiences that they bring back when they come back to their own country also
will support their confidence
.
Furthermore
, living in a new environment means that they will live together with
a new kind of people
who have different beliefs. This
means that the way of praying and doing religious activities also
will have a big difference in both countries. For instance
, Indonesia which is the biggest Muslim country in the world and India which is dominated by Hinduism will have a gap in the way they pray. An Indian who visits Indonesia for exchange
will surprised because Muslims have to pray five times each day, which means that sometimes Indonesian pupils will have a break to pray, even though in the middle of class. However
, the way Indian people
respect
Indonesian Muslims for their beliefs is an example of how respect
is grown during their visits.
In conclusion, the student
exchange
means that they have to live in a new environment with new cultures and some possible differences in beliefs. In the effort to adapt, the teenagers will grow their confidence
while
showing respect
for different religions will develop their respect
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...