It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
In the recent years, it is totally critical for countries to enhance
travel
industry. There are a numer of notions believing that since mass travelling through nations become easier, it can boost a Use synonyms
country
's economy, Use synonyms
while
other views think that it is crucial to stricten Linking Words
tourism
at a reasonable scale. In my opinion, there are both positive sides and drawbacks of having affordable Use synonyms
travel
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, giving people easier chances to Linking Words
travel
between different countries will enhance Use synonyms
country
’s living standards and develop into a muiltitude cultures community. Use synonyms
This
can provide the residents with more experiences with the foreigners, Linking Words
besides
, city’s economy can Linking Words
also
increase significantly Linking Words
due to
the rise of visitors. Linking Words
For example
, Ho Chi Minh city, which gathered a numerous of foreign visitors from all over the world, become well-known for being one of the most mordernize and commercial city in Vietnam. Allowing tourist to have an affordable Linking Words
travel
is Use synonyms
also
an effective way to advertise your Linking Words
country
through people. Take Thailand as an example, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
has became more famous between the tourist for its easy Use synonyms
travel
, it not only helps thailand Use synonyms
tourism
industry develop, it Use synonyms
also
creates jobs and chances for the residents.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, there are few drawbacks of giving affordable Linking Words
travel
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the enhance of Linking Words
tourism
can caused damages to environment. There will be more deforestation, trees being chopped down to make way for commercial facilities Use synonyms
such
as: resorts, hotels, shopping malls and so on. Linking Words
This
will create a myriad of environmental problems Linking Words
such
as: air, soil pollution, the increasing of carbon footprint, only the matter of time. Linking Words
Besides
, there might be a lack of resources Linking Words
due to
the enhance of consumers through Linking Words
tourism
, Use synonyms
moreover
, cultural homogenization can lead to the loss of local tradition. Take new york city as an example, Linking Words
due to
experienced with the overwhelm of cultural interaction, the american teenagers might lose direction of where they belong to. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
can increase traffic jams and accidents Linking Words
while
transporting. Soon in the nearly future, these cities will not have enough spaces for their citizens and visitors, which might increased more society problems.
In conclusion, despite the fact that affordable Linking Words
travel
create many potential benefits to the Use synonyms
country
, there are aslo multiple drawbacks entailing Use synonyms
this
matter. From my perspective, it is still essential for the policy makers to pay more attention on mass Linking Words
tourism
. Use synonyms
Thus
, policy makers should strike a balance between suitstanale and economic growth.Linking Words
Submitted by nghi.bella.phan on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.