Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to regularly watch television whether at home or school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education is unquestionably one of the most prevalent and worrying issues in any society, and its management should be taken seriously. Of course, it is important to involve a variety of methods in order to improve the process of learning.
However
, despite a few benefits of television, I consider
this
option not to be suitable for everyone. On the one hand, there are some advantages of watching television which could definitely have a positive impact on students.
Firstly
, there are a
lot
of great channels which provide different news and theories,
therefore
children could eventually receive new knowledge.
For instance
, channels like Discovery contain a
lot
of exciting and useful information which is significant for the development of a young brain.
Secondly
, there are a few channels showing the programme in foreign languages, so using them could be a good opportunity for students who are studying a second language.
Consequently
, teachers could highly recommend watching it in order to influence learning and improve some skills.
On the other hand
, I agree that
this
method could be misused and bring some negative consequences.
To begin
with, nowadays there is a
lot
of inappropriate content that could have violent or sexual episodes,
therefore
it should not be watched by young individuals.
Moreover
, it is difficult enough to limit the approach to some kinds of films or serials, so sometimes
this
problem cannot be solved by installing
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Furthermore
, light from a screen has a horrible impact on people's eyes
due to
the fact that it destroys some anatomical structures.
As a consequence
, a
lot
of children have problems with their eyes even during their childhood.
For example
, there is a
lot
of scientific research which have already shown a positive correlation between vision quality and the number of hours spent looking at some gadget.
To conclude
, despite varying opinions, I reckon that pupils should not be encouraged to regularly watch some programmes
due to
their harmful effect on physical and mental health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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