The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use number. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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to six years will enable people how to read, write

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use

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and eventually it will be the foremost procedure to remove poverty from developing nations. I

am strongly agree

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with that statement as

this

system will develop

individuals

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ethical behaviour

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their resources and will help one to establish a new

business

. Now, I will articulate my point of view in the forthcoming paragraphs. From an

overall

perspective, there are several merits of free

education

. Perhaps the predominant benefit is ethical behaviour to their resources.

As those

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persons who have some basic educational knowledge,

they

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their country's wealth.

As a result

, one region's wealth can be utilized properly.

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, a recent study found that 20% of natural gas is used more by illiterate people as they do not know how to

use

it properly. That's why I believe that

education

is required for a certain period of time. A

further

point in favour of

this

free schooling is that it helps people to generate

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of

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starting modern

business

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businesses

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. If individuals have some basic knowledge of reading,

writing

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and

use

numerical data, they can

use

their thinking ability to process

up to date

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shop. By establishing a modern

business

, they can not only reduce the unemployment rate but

also

provide

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benefit

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for a community.

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,

according to

a survey, those human beings who stopped their

education

at the age of 12 or 13, ended up

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successful

businessman

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or a politician and they are helping their nation to a great extent. In conclusion,

free of cost

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education

system not only

help

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one to gather ethical attitudes to the resources of his/her region but

also

help

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to stage a new

business

. And these activities

helps

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a nation to achieve

further

benefit.