The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar charts illustrate the
illiteracy
rates
in four different regions
categorized by gender, for the previous year.
Overall
, the statistic of male illiteracy
has always been lower compared to the one for females
Male illiteracy
rates
have consistently remained lower than those for females
across all regions
. In particular
Specifically, in three regions
(Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia), illiteracy
rates
were notably higher for both genders.
Over the recorded period, the percentage of illiterate individuals was at its lowest in developed countries, where they constituted an insignificant (negligible) minority, with a percentage accounting for merely 1% for
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of
males
and 2% for
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of
females
. Similarly
, in Latin America/Caribbean and East Asia/Oceania, these rates
represented a smaller (fraction) minority, ranging hovering between 10% and 20%.
Conversely
, the remaining regions
showed/ demonstrated the highest percentages. Notably, Sub-Saharan Africa and the Arab States exhibit similar illiteracy
rates
, standing at 31% for males
49% for females
, and 29%, for males
and 51% for females
, respectively. Finally
, South Asia recorded the highest illiteracy
rates
for both genders, with figures reaching 33% for males
and 56% for females
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