The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The bar charts illustrate the
illiteracy
rates
in four different
regions
categorized by gender, for the previous year.
Overall
, the statistic of male
illiteracy
has always been lower compared to the one for
females
Male
illiteracy
rates
have consistently remained lower than those for
females
across all
regions
.
In particular
Specifically, in three
regions
(Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia),
illiteracy
rates
were notably higher for both genders. Over the recorded period, the percentage of illiterate individuals was at its lowest in developed countries, where they constituted an insignificant (negligible) minority, with a percentage accounting for merely 1%
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males
and 2%
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females
.
Similarly
, in Latin America/Caribbean and East Asia/Oceania, these
rates
represented a smaller (fraction) minority, ranging hovering between 10% and 20%.
Conversely
, the remaining
regions
showed/ demonstrated the highest percentages. Notably, Sub-Saharan Africa and the Arab States exhibit similar
illiteracy
rates
, standing at 31% for
males
49% for
females
, and 29%, for
males
and 51% for
females
, respectively.
Finally
, South Asia recorded the highest
illiteracy
rates
for both genders, with figures reaching 33% for
males
and 56% for
females
.
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