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The image depicts a map of
Canterbury
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, with key features
such
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 as a
Countryside
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area
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 surrounding a central
Town
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 Centre labeled as a no traffic zone, a University space is represented, Housing areas are illustrated, and Main roads are marked, connecting
Canterbury
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 to Chatham (7km, Population: 4,500) and Sturry (5km, Population: 7,000), with a compass indicating North at the top of the map;
additionally
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, symbols for two survey sites S1 and S2 are present within the
Town
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 Centre and University areas respectively. Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate. Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan! Check it out Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by
one
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 of our users. The map illustrates two building site options for a new school
that is
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 proposed to be constructed in a
town
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 named
Canterbury
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.
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, of the two options,
one
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 is located in the
town
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 center, and the other
one
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 is in the
countryside
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. The
area
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 has the
town
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 center in the middle, surrounded by a field for housing, and that region is comprised in another
area
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, which is the
countryside
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. There is
also
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 a university on the north, which is placed on the border of the
countryside
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 and the housing region. The plan is to build a school adjacent to a main
road
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 that runs from the southwest to northeast side of the
town
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, cutting through all the three regions. On the northeast, the
road
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 connects
Canterbury
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 to place named Sturry, which is 5km away with 7,000 people, and on the southwest it gives access to an
area
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that is
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 7km away, and it is called Chartham, with a population of 4,500. So
one
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 of the planned school sites is along
this
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road
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 in the southern part of the
town
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 center, and the other
one
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 is slightly farther from the
road
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 on the estern region of the counryside.
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introduction conclusion present
Provide a clear introduction that clearly states the purpose of the task and a summary statement at the end to conclude your response.
supported main points
Ensure that your main points are fully developed and clearly explained, possibly including more support or examples.
clear comprehensive ideas
The response accurately describes the locations and connections between key areas such as the Town Centre, University, and Countryside using the map summary.
logical structure
The description consistently uses terms found in the context, such as 'Town Centre,' 'Countryside,' and 'Main roads', which helps maintain coherence.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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