the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
The given chart displays the drinking habits of
coffee
for Australian people in five cities in Australia.
Overall
, the majority of the nation selected a cafe when they wanted to drink coffee
however
, making fresh coffee
at home was the least common among them.
As can be seen,in three cities, namely Sydney, Melbourn and Hobert, visiting a cafe was quite popular among the crowd with 60 to 65% of residents. Moreover
, more than half of individuals in Brisbane and almost half of Adelaide preferred going to a cafe. In addition
, instant espresso was used by between 45 to 55% of all residents in these five cities, with the least in Sydney and the most in Hobart.
On the contrary
, it was unpopular to purchase fresh coffee
.Only 35% of Adelaide and Brisbane people bought fresh espresso, whereas
in Sydney 45% of residents purchased it. Besides
, fresh coffee
was drunk between 35 to 45% in Melbourn and Hobart.Submitted by zbafshar92 on
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