some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their subjects, other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for all qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own view.

✍️ Want to check your own essay?Write on this topic →

Introduction

It is clear that

Linking Words

if you focus on some lessons, you will understand them better, rather than study on a lot of books.

However

Linking Words

, it should not be forgotten that if you just keep some books you will lose some important lessons.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, There are some pros and cons for both of them.

As a result

Linking Words

, I going to write an article to explain the advantages and disadvantages impact of

this

Linking Words

issue on the community's life.

Body paragraph 1

To begin

Linking Words

with, it is undeniable that

this

Linking Words

issue is one of the most challenging issues in all universities around the world.

In addition

Linking Words

, we are required to learn various majors together.

For example

Linking Words

, we need to study science

besides

Linking Words

math.

Consequently

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

topic can lead to improving our skills, and clearly,we can find a job. Owing to; our knowledge of different subjects, we can apply for different careers

Body paragraph 2

However

Linking Words

, if we studied just a major, we might be Professional in that subject.

For instance

Linking Words

, in mechanics, an engineer can earn more and more money.

Although

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

job is really difficult.

Also

Linking Words

, he/she could not do other work

instead

Linking Words

of his/her career .

Consequently

Linking Words

, a recent study by a state university in Iran, showed that some colleges that teach various books are more successful than colleges that consist of a few majors.

Conclusion

To conclude

Linking Words

, as I see, both of them have good and bad effects on society’s life and it is difficult to choose one of them.

Finally

Linking Words

, I am keen on being between different topics.

alimsvvv5

Aug 24, 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

16
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

255 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Broaden
Perspectives
Specialize
Critical thinking
Problem-solving skills
Career success
Interdisciplinary connections
Structured path
Clear goals
Creativity
Innovation
Academic credibility
Recognition
Balance
Exploring

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replacethem. Do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary era, human beings are dependent on vehicles to travel everywhere. Therefore, we are in huge need of fuel. This essay agrees that fossil fuels that are burnt by all vehicles should be prohibited and the use of electric cars should be promoted. Firstly, global warming can be reduced by controlling pollution created by these gases, and secondly, electric cars are cost-effective as well as environmentally friendly.
7
band
In many countries, there is a shortage of qualified teachers, especially in rural areas. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?
In various countries around the world, the lack of highly educated teachers is observed, specially in the countryside. The issue is caused by the low level of income in rural areas and it can be solved by implementing various governmental programs.
7
band
Some people think that students in high school should study music as a compulsory school subject. Others believe that such a requirement would be a waste of valuable school study time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although some nations opt that obligatory music lessons are unbeneficial to the children during their education time, I agree that learners ought to study music lessons as a compulsory course because this trend can affect positively their future lives.
7.5
band
A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter -describe what this book was about -explain how this book influenced you -say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
I want to give this letter to you due to your announcement about 'The book that influences me a lot'
7.5
band
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People prefer driving their own vehicles to travelling via buses and trains. This essay explains the reasons for driving a car to travel and which actions governments should carry out to lead to citizens using public transportation.

some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their subjects, other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for all qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own view.

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replacethem. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, there is a shortage of qualified teachers, especially in rural areas. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

Some people think that students in high school should study music as a compulsory school subject. Others believe that such a requirement would be a waste of valuable school study time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.