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The bar chart below shows us seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.

The bar chart below shows us seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.
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The bar chart illustrates the United States seafood construction from 2002 and 2022 and the forecast for 2032. The pie chart describes the construction
to
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geographical
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a geographical
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 structure in 2022.
Overall
, the US seafood import market grew early in 2022 to 2022 with the majority of the
imports
 sourced from several countries.
in
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 the future,
however
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 import levels are forecast to decrease. Between the years 2002 and 2022 seafood
imports
 in
United
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the United
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 States grew from 6 million dollars at the
begining
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beginning
 of the period to over 20 billion in 2022.
Additionally
,2032 slightly decreases from 18 billion US dollars. Regarding the geographical split of
imports
 in 2022 China,Thailand and Canada were the countries
are
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controlling
two thirds
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 of the market. probably,
china
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China
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(28%),Thailand(23%) and Canada(16%)
foLLwing
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following
 countries are
highily
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highly
imports
 sea foods for the united states for the year 2022 and Indonesia,Vietnam,
Ecuador
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and Ecuador
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are
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are imported
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imports
 less than (10%) of
market
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the market
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 respectively.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend analysis
  • Forecast
  • Imports
  • Seafood
  • Geographical distribution
  • Dominant market
  • Sustainability
  • Trade agreements
  • Consumer preferences
  • Global events
  • Consumption patterns
  • Source country
  • Economic impact
  • Aquaculture
  • Wild-caught
  • Exporting nations
  • Trade balance
  • Marine ecosystem
  • Fishery products
  • Supply chain
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