The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the percentage of three education levels of Bulgarian people who wish to go abroad and live there in the years 2002, 2006 and 2008.
Overall
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, individuals who had secondary learning were the highest proportion in all the years
while
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higher education level was the lowest percentage in the year 2008. As far as the number of community who like to fly to another country in the year 2002 is concerned, 65% of people had secondary study, which was the highest.
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, society who pursued study up to a higher level was the lowest, which was 17%. When it comes to the years 2006 and 2008, they were the same as the previous year, because those who had secondary training levels were 61% and 59% in 2006 and 2008, respectively.
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, higher educated people were the lowest in 2008, which was the lowest.
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  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • summarize
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