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IT HAS BEEN ARGUED THAT

EXPERIMENT

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ANIMAL

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BRINGS HAS

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POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE

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. SOME PEOPLE AGREE WITH

THIS

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WHILE

OTHER

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DISAGREE WITH

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STATEMENT.

HOWEVER

, THERE IS NOT ANOTHER ALTERNATIVE FOR SCIENTIST TO

USE

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THAN ANIMALS. THE EXPLANATION WILL BE PRESENTED

FURTHER

IN THE FOLLOWING ESSAY. A GROUP OF PEOPLE AGREE THAT WE SHOULD STOP USING

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FOR

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BECAUSE THEY BELIEVE THAT ANIMALS HAVE

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. THEY CAN SUFFER LIKE HUMAN

BEING

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, THEY

ALSO

BELIEVE THAT ANIMALS HAVE

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, THEY ARE ALLOWED TO LIVE AND FEEL FREE.

IN CONTRAST

, ANOTHER HORDE OF PEOPLE SUPPORT THAT IT IS OKAY TO

USE

THEM FOR SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH

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BECAUSE IT IS BETTER TO KILL

ANIMAL

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THAN

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, WE WILL NOT FEEL GUILTY IF THE ANIMAL IS KILLED, IN CASE

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THE

TRY OUT

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IS FEIL. I AM TOTALLY CONVINCED THAT THERE IS NOT BETTER THAN ANIMAL TO BE USED FOR SCIENTIFIC DISCOVERY IN

THIS

WORLD, MANY SCIENTISTS ARE MAKING TREMENDOUS MEDICINE FOR HEALTH CARE, ANOTHER ASPECT IS AGRICULTURE AND TO KNOW THE PRODUCTION

IS WORK

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OR NOT WE NEED TO

USE

TRY OUT AND THAT SHOULD BE ANIMAL.

WHERE

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IN BIOLOGY, HUMAN IS

ALSO

GROUP

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OF ANIMAL, IT HAS BEEN PROVED THAT MONKEY HAS THE SAME GENE

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HUMAN, WE

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CANNOT

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USE

TREES BECAUSE WE ARE NOT THE SAME GROUP, IT IS REALLY OBVIOUS THAT ANIMAL IS THE BEST CREATURE TO

USE

EXPERIMENT

FOR THE SAKE OF HUMAN BEING. TO SUPPORT OUR

LIVE

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WHETHER IN HEALTHCARE OR IN AGRICULTURE WE NEED THE BEST PRODUCT AND IT NEEDS TO BE TESTED BEFORE SPREADING OUT TO MASS PRODUCTION.

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2Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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