Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Clothing is one of the basic needs of every human being. The original purpose of clothing was to safeguard the body from environmental factors,

such

as heat, cold, Serpens, etc.

However

, some believe that there’s a greater possibility to link someone’s culture and character to what they wear.

Nonetheless

this

essay disagrees with

this

opinion. Because clothing has become an appearance enhancer in today’s context.

Also

, people decide on what they wear relating to the event and the requirements. Fashion has become a broader concept, creating a greater opportunity for a bigger choice for people in what they wear.

Also

, fashion does change over time adding more characteristics with modernization. People with public image and attraction set new fashion trends. It is a new trend, to wear multicultural dresses to improve outlook. As an example, in Sri Lanka Sinhalese ladies choose sarees worn by Tamil ladies for functions

due to

their vibrant colours. In

such

instances, a person having the aforementioned thinking would go wrong.

Further

, opinion on dress code differs based on the event, requirement, and disposable income. As an example, a person would wear official attire for an office irrespective of his/her culture or character.

In other words

, one wouldn’t wear the same clothing for a wedding and for a funeral.

Furthermore

, humans would choose winter clothes during winter and summer clothes in summer. One’s buying powder is directly related to the quality and variety of dresses.

Accordingly

this

, justifies that the initial thinking is misleading to link with clothing with culture and character. In conclusion, a person’s background and qualities cannot be defined based on the dress code, because dressing is all about developing outer image and linked with the situation and necessity.

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the gender ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuels source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.