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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The majority of
people
 today feel that printed
newspapers
 or
books
 are something from the past. I completely agree. The technological revolution has made anything printed on
papers
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 seems like an outdated thing.
Therefore
,
people
 now prefer to read
newspapers
,
books
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 or even study using electronic devices only. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the various reasons that made
people
 switch from using paper to devices.  Nearly every newspaper company has an online website, and almost any book out there has an electronic PDF version online.
This
 has made it even more convenient
to
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people
 so they can have access to the newspaper or
books
 at any time and any place
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 a click on their phones rather than walking to the store or library to get them. Even though
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traditional
newspapers
 are relatively cheap, many individuals prefer to get them online because having them free seems even more convenient.
On the other hand
,
while
 some
books
 have the same prices online as the printed ones,
people
 would still rather choose the online version just to avoid the trouble of going to actual places searching for them. In the future, companies will not print
newspapers
 or
books
due to
 economic reasons, since individuals will be no longer interested in buying them.
This
 will definitely have enormous impacts both positive and negative.
For example
, the percentage of deforestation worldwide will dramatically decrease which will save the environment.
On the other hand
, one of the most negative impacts is that the
people
 who are working in the paper industry or newspaper factories will lose their jobs since the world is switching to online versions. Many authors will suffer copywriting issues
whereas
 some
people
 will
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leave
 their
books
 online for free which will surely lead authors and companies to financial crisis
due to
 the loss of their sales since their work is out there for free. If the governments do not strictly prohibit
such
 issues, companies will suffer. In conclusion, the world is already switching everything possible to online versions
due to
 their convenience. In the near future, printed
books
 and
newspapers
 will be considered as an old-fashioned industry
that is
 no longer popular or even used. Societies have already made their choice of
this
 electronic conversion whether its benefits outweigh its downsides. We need to adapt to
this
 new conversion anyway
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 and set clear rules and regulations for those involved in the industry to ensure that
this
 change won't be a concern to anyone and save individuals' rights.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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