The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France

in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts illustrate the sections of fuel sources, coal, oil, natural
gas
,
hydropower
, and nuclear
power
in terms of electricity manufacturing in two separate countries, in 1980 and 2000. From the figures, it can be inferred that in
Australia
, coal constitutes the highest
amount
of proportion in both years, whilst in
France
nuclear
power
represents the largest
units
in 2000.
Also
, it is considerable that both coal and natural
gas
are responsible for the same number of contributions. Beginning with the highest proportion in 1980, when
Australia
produced 100
units
all of which coal made up half of all and natural
gas
comprised 20%,
this
production in
France
is precisely 25 and 25
units
of all, respectively.
In addition
,
while
hydropower
generated 20% in
Australia
,
this
term is responsible for the lowest
amount
of fuels which is only 5
units
out of 90. In 2000, the
amount
of nuclear
power
in
France
rose significantly from 15 out of 90 to 126 out of 180
units
.
In contrast
, the
amount
of natural
gas
and
hydropower
declined to 2.
However
, coal production remained the same number at 25.
On the other hand
, in
Australia
, both
hydropower
and coal increased to 36 and 130 respectively, which means
while
Australia
relied on coal in 2000,
France
depended on nuclear
power
.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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