Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce crime rate?

Crime has been noticed more in cities rather than

countryside

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the countryside

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. People are suffering from various

type

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types

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of

crimes

because

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for

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many reasons.

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reasons

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the reasons

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for

higher

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the higher

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crime

rate

in urban areas compared to rural

ares

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areas

and

solution

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to reduce it which can

be

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benefit

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citizens. To commence with, there are various criminal activities administered because of

lack

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a lack

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of

education

, lack of

money

and lack of

job

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jobs

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. To add on, everyone wants to live in well

devloped

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developed

area where things can easily accessible.

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,

population

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the population

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is increasing day by day but job opportunities are

less

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fewer

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.

Consequently

, illegal activities like juvenile

crimes

, cyber

crimes

and

kidnaping

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kidnapping

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has

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have

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been

leveled

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levelled

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up.

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, Expenses for living in

devloped

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developed

cities are

more

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apply

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higher than outback

such

as rent,

grocery

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groceries

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, and

education

which can cause

money

demand. Jobless people

wants

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to find out illegal ways to get

money

.

However

, there are numerous ways to reduce

crimes

.

Firstly

,

Government

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the Government

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should provide

basic

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a basic

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pay

rate

to employees.

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,

Government

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the Government

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should provide free

education

to students and decide a strict punishment who perform activities like

this

.

Secondly

,

accoording

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according

to

population

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the population

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, amount of jobs should be available to offer

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, if

education

will be

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is

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free, parents have

less expense

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fewer expenses

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to manage and indirectly

crimes

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crime

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rate

will be less.

To Conclude

,

Crimes

are more noticed in cities compared to

countryside

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the countryside

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because of uneducated people and

money

issue

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issues

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due to

high expenses. In my opinion,

government

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the government

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should take care of

education

without any cost and enough

job

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jobs

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; so

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that, Crime

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, Crime

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the crime

rate

can be controlled.