you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Shreya, I am writing to let you know that I recently came back from holidays from your house. When I came back, I found that I
forgot
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my wallet at your place. We had amazing well-planned holidays in Toronto. I enjoyed the panoramic view from
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the CN
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tower and
amazed
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to see
view
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the view
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from
top
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which I had never experienced. I am very thankful to have you as a best friend who invited me for a holiday after
stressful
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a stressful
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work schedule. Toronto was one of
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the places
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on the bucket list. I was having my breakfast before my flight, I left my wallet just on the dining table. because I was in a hurry
as
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when
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my Uber driver called that he arrived to pick me up. I paid Uber payment from a credit card which was directly connected to my bank account. but, I realised when I came back home and I went grocery shopping. I wonder if you can send my wallet with Jay, our school friend who lives near your house;he will come to visit me after 5 days. He will come to pick
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from your house and
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me when he will come to my home. Thank you for your help. Kind regards, Pooja Patel
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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