More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the new era, a growing issue of people becoming dangerously overweight. To solve the above problem, one school of thought holds that some people propose increasing the cost of high-calorie foods.
While
I accept that their perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that individuals should Linking Words
also
be self-conscious about their own weight status.
On the one hand, the growth of fattening food prices is applied as a public policy in each country that could be beneficial to their society as a whole. Linking Words
This
is because payable cost fluctuations affect people's consumption. Consumers tend to choose products based on their budget, so an increase in the payable cost of a product contributes to a decrease in consumer purchasing. Linking Words
However
, fatty foods are mostly essential commodities, even if they increase, they are still affordable for families. Linking Words
For instance
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according to
a survey conducted by the Department of Consumer Protection, KFC fried chicken stores in Vietnam have increased their prices five times in a recent decade. Especially, its sales have not decreased, Linking Words
on the contrary
, it has increased eight times since 2014. Linking Words
As a result
, it is difficult to say that it helps to limit obesity in the community.
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On the other hand
, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that individuals should Linking Words
also
be responsible for their weight status. Linking Words
First,
each person must raise their awareness of products that they will buy and use. Linking Words
For example
, consumers can look at the amount of fat recorded on the label of packages before purchasing to ensure their nutritional needs are in each meal. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a healthy diet should be a considerable choice for every family, Linking Words
such
as a combination of fibre, fats, and carbohydrates. We know that fat is Linking Words
also
an important nutrient that has been proven necessary for the human body. Linking Words
Therefore
, if it is removed from the menu, it is not necessarily a good thing.
In conclusion, whilst it is irrefutable that increasing the price of fattening foods is a simple solution to the problem of individuals becoming overweight, I would contend that it fails to address the root causes of the issue and some they should put effort into adjusting their diet.Linking Words
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