Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuses both these views and give your own opinion?

Certain people assume that a
friend
should be with some things
such
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other people argue that your
friend
partner should have in some cases another
opinion
than you to have some discussion.I tend to think that
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my experience that
friend
should
be with
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a near view of life like you but sometimes in some ,things it can be others. There might be several reasons to think that your mate should have the same vision.
Firstly
, if your mate has the same interests and the same views it will be interesting for you to have communication with him.
Secondly
, if you will have
friend
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friends
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who have another outlook on your essential topic you will always argue with them and will be difficult to find a solution to
this
opinion
.
For example
,
in
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nowadays people always argue about politics and there
is
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too many situations
that
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where
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this
topic breaks many relationships.  On
other
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hand, if your ally has another view from yours and he will
respects
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it everything will be fine.
In other words
, when a partner cares about your attitude there should be a polite and clear relationship as we are used.
For instance
, there are many relationships as we can see
such
as a son with
dad
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every
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one respectively
other
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another
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opinion
and
do
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not want to argue that and
usually
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they do not speak
in like
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about
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this
topic.  In
conclution
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conclusion
, we can see that
friend
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a friend
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is
essential
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an essential
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person
which
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with
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you
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whom you
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sould
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should
could
relation
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respectively and correctly,
therefore
it will cause
fine
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relationship. My
opinion
that
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is that
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you should find
partner
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a partner
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with
same
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the same
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view of life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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