The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

I strongly agree that the government decided to build a new

university

in my

community

. I believe it benefits all inhabitants,

for example

, businesses the

university

attracts might boost the local economy.

However

, there are some drawbacks that need to be considered.

To begin

with, a new

university

could benefit local

residents

in several ways.

Firstly

, since the

university

offers broad working positions, like staff and employees.

Residents

would have chances to work at the

university

close to their homes, which help them save time in commuting and taking care of their families.

Secondly

, when the

university

is built up, businesses would be attracted and located in

this

area to make money and serve students primarily. Local

residents

can

also

enjoy their service and have a more convenient lifestyle,

for example

, people could go shopping and eat in restaurants in the vicinity of their homes.

Last

but not least, teenagers will have chances to accept higher education in the local

community

, which offers opportunities to live with their families during college to enjoy family hours.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantages to having a

university

in a

community

, which are traffic congestion and noise. With a crowd of students popping into a

community

, traffic congestion might happen inevitably and affect the living quality of

residents

as well. In busy hours, like 9 a.m. or 5 p.m. when people leave homes and arrive home, passengers and drivers might waste a ton of time commuting.

Moreover

, the construction affects

residents

more or less. The air and noise pollution generated in construction might annoy

residents

,

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and even cause mental health issues who can not endure them. In conclusion, I support the plan because it brings numerous profits to local

residents

.

However

, if its negative effects can not be reduced to the minimum, the final decision is up to all

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