Daily traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?

These days, there are plenty of machines on the city roads which cause heavy traffic.  In my opinion, there are two main factors that why
people
use
their personal cars, on the one ,hand government offices and organizations and
on the other hand
schools.  When
people
go to their offices to attend to their work or
use
their personal
vehicles
to take their children to and from school, there is it results in heavy traffic on the streets, and
people
think with their personal cars, they can manage their time and their money better.There are many ways to control traffic, but I can express three solutions here. 
First,
governments should provide online infrastructure for their services so that
people
do not need to leave their houses to pursue their requests and needs and can do their work at home.   In the
Second,
step, governments should not only develop common public transportation but
also
use
new and modern
vehicles
such
as electric scooters and bicycles. Governments should minimize the cost of using these devices and carefully monitor their movement timing. The third and most important step is to
use
mass advertising to attract the majority of
people
to
use
the modern form of transportation, and encourage especially teenagers to
use
the new
vehicles
when they want to go to school. 
Finally
,
To conclude
it is possible to reduce the
use
of private
vehicles
through online services, new and free public transportation and advertising, which will not only reduce the number of cars on the streets but
also
, it will help clean the air.
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