The maps below show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show Pancha Village in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare the Pancha Village in 2005 and its altered version in 2015. To summarize, the village had developed its roadway, constructed
further
infrastructures, and equipped a telecommunication system. It is notable that the unpaved street in 2005 was renovated into a highway 10 years after. To the northeast of
this
road, a secondary school was built
in addition
to the primary school in 2005.
Additionally
, there was only a house to the south of the school since the other 2 houses in 2005 were demolished.
Moreover
, an additional building was constructed a decade later in the sectioned-off area for the pagoda located to the southeast of the road. There are apparent alterations to the left side of the street.
Firstly
, telephone poles were established along the highway.
Secondly
, some houses, on the west side of the road, were accessible to the satellites in 2015.
In addition
, the market below the residential area was reorganized and expanded with more goods stands.
Lastly
, on the bottom left of the map, telecommunication towers were provided for the Pancha Village.
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