The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
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diagram displays the production of instant noodles. Linking Words
Overall
, it is an automated process that consists of six main steps: mixing raw materials, producing Linking Words
dough
strips, making noodle discs, cooking, drying and packing.
First of all, flour kept in storage silos is transported to a manufacturing centre by truck. There, it is combined with water and oil in a mixer to create Use synonyms
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passes through several rollers which knead it until it becomes Linking Words
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sheets that have a consistent texture and the perfect thickness for instant noodles. Use synonyms
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the sheets are cut by slitters into Linking Words
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strips, which are Use synonyms
subsequently
placed in moulds to form noodle discs.
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then
go through the cooking process in which they are fried in oil. Once fried, they are cooled and dried before being put into cups Linking Words
along with
packets of vegetables and spices. Linking Words
Finally
, the cups are labelled and sealed.Linking Words
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