The maps show developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps show developments which took place at the seaside

resort

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of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

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, a comparison

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the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to

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urban landscape. In 1990, the sea

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was a much greener residential

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area

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with a large number of

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and individual houses, but during the next 15

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the beach

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experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the

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north of the sea were cut down, with all the houses along the railway line being knocked down and replaced by apartment houses.

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, a new industrial estate with

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, factory and ferry sprang up on the territory of the

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.  Only

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trees

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north of the sea remained.

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developments were

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of

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instead

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of

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and residential hoses.  A ferry was

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built between

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the railway

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and the coast.