The maps show developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps show developments which took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
The maps show developments which took place at the seaside
resort
of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, a comparison
oh
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of
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the two maps reveals a change from a largely rural to
a
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an
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urban landscape. In 1990, the sea
resort
was a much greener residential
are
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area
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with a large number of
trees
and individual houses, but during the next 15
years
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the beach
resort
experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the
trees
north of the sea were cut down, with all the houses along the railway line being knocked down and replaced by apartment houses.
Moreover
, a new industrial estate with
supermarket
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, factory and ferry sprang up on the territory of the
resort
.  Only
few
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trees
north of the sea remained.
Further
developments were
construction
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the construction
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of
factory
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factories
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instead
of
trees
and residential hoses.  A ferry was
also
built between
railway
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the railway
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and the coast.
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