In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays most of the

cities

in the world experience problems related to overpopulation. To solve

this

issue governments try to stimulate businesses and individuals to move to the urban areas. In my opinion, the potential benefits of

this

case outweigh the drawbacks.

Firstly

, I will demonstrate how

this

trend decreases the

amount

of

pollution

and noise in the

cities

,

then

the main disadvantage of making

people

suffer from easy access to advanced technology and transportation facilities and employment opportunities. The foremost advantage of encouraging some groups to move out of

cities

is that the

amount

of

pollution

will

decrease

. As the

cities

become less populated, the degree of damage that

people

cause to water, air, and land will eventually reduce. The

amount

of car usage will

also

decrease

and there will be less traffic,

consequently

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people

will lose little time

due to

traffic. The

amount

of carbon emission to air,

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vast

amount

of dirty garbage that pollutes the water will

also

decrease

. Because of less

pollution

to the environment, the

cities

will become more habitable

places

to live.

Additionally

, because the less

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will be needed for the decreased population, the economic and natural

recourses

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resources

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could be used

mor

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more

effectively and efficiently. The research conducted by

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Government Agency in the USA shows that the main reason

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pollution

in the

cities

is that the level of population is more than their normal capacities.

As a result

of

this

problem, inefficiency and damage to nature increase day by day. There are certain disadvantages

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encouraging some groups of

people

to accommodate

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less populated urban

places

. The major disadvantage is less access of migrated

people

to advanced technology, comfortable transportation,

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education systems

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etc. Because, nowadays, most of the advanced facilities are located in densely populated areas, the urban

places

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lack

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these facilities. Another drawback for businesses is that the demand

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their product could fall

as a result

of a low level of population. Less

people

mean fewer consumers and fewer consumers mean less demand.

Moreover

,

due to

falling demand for their products, the companies will start to

decrease

their production and their employees.

As a result

, The Unemployment rate will increase in these

places

. A survey which was conducted among

people

who moved from city

centers

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to urban

places

suggests that

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most of these

people

are complaining about

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of transportation and education systems. In conclusion, in my opinion,

although

there are some drawbacks

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encouraging certain

people

to locate in less populated areas,

however

, the benefits definitely outweigh them in terms of reduced

pollution

and efficient use of resources.