The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph describes the past and projected economy for a local authority in New Zealand.
This
writing will state the trends and the details and compare them when necessary. In the overview, all categories reach a higher number
at the end
of the graph, some categories increase stagnantly,
while
some are fluctuative. To start with, the rates
revenue
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and user charges were climbing constantly throughout the year, reaching about 2,400 and 2,000 million dollars, respectively, in 2022,
thus
, they both added about 1,000 million dollars to their initial values in 2012.
Moreover
, they constantly have 800,000 dollars difference
with
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each other.
Second,
borrowing value fluctuates as time
went
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by, resulting in a lower amount of cash
at the end
of 2022 than in 2012,
in contrast
to grants and subsidies that are capable of getting a higher number
at the end
.
In addition
, grants and subsidies had their peak in 2016,
while
borrowings had their minimum point.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected
  • fluctuation
  • steadily
  • significant
  • revenue
  • expenditure
  • surpass
  • align
  • trend
  • stability
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • forecast
  • decline
  • rise
  • consistent
  • notable
  • growth
  • factors
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