Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the hectic lifestyle, many people are inclined to have junk

food

rather than

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healthy

food

. A colossal amount of produced

food

and beverages

consist

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of high levels of sugar which can

be triggered

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peoples’ health.

This

can be mitigated by increasing the price of those items. I agree with the given phenomenon

,

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since sugar is the main root of premature

death

and many

diseases

such

as cardiovascular

diseases

.

However

, the sugary industry’s revenue cannot be neglected. There are two major reasons why sweet products

in

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danger for people, namely to cause

diseases

and premature

death

.

Firstly

, there are many restaurants which sell numerous fast

food

. Those consist of the high level of sugar and it directly

influence

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peoples’ health.

For instance

, a recent research which was held by the

ministry

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of

health

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in Sri Lanka

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revealed that approximately 78% of people

got

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cardiovascular

diseases

due to

their unhealthy

food

patterns.

Secondly

, nowadays, there is a significant number of premature

death

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. The main reason for

this

pressing concern is

,

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high

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level of sugary consumption.

For instance

,

according to

a study which has been published by medical authorities in the USA, especially

two-third

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of

reason

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the reason

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for premature

death

was,

consumption

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the consumption

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of sweet

food

and beverages.

Therefore

,

it is clear that

sugary production should be alleviated.

On the other hand

, the sweet

food

and drink manufacturing industry’s earnings cannot be neglected. Because it helps to boost the economy of the country. Another reason is, there are many employees and if they lose their jobs they cannot survive.

For example

, over 30% of individuals work in the

food

industry in Sri Lanka.

Hence

,

elimination

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of

sugary

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the sugary

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industry from the country, will definitely

brings

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about

socio-economic

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crisis. In conclusion, sugary

food

and beverages

brings

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about so many negative ramifications for society and by increasing its prices it can be alleviated. I agree with the given statement

due to

diseases

and premature

death

. It is recommended that the government should conduct public awareness programs to protect individuals.